Comments on: The Bottom of the Stairs http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/ Read Me. Fri, 16 May 2008 14:35:16 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: crogerswo http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-65 crogerswo Tue, 22 Apr 2008 13:06:34 +0000 http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-65 Yea! The voice you created was incredible. Normaly I hate reading stories on here 4 some reason but I could just not stop reading this! It was really good. I agree with all the other comments. It was just an incredible story. Yea! The voice you created was incredible. Normaly I hate reading stories on here 4 some reason but I could just not stop reading this! It was really good. I agree with all the other comments. It was just an incredible story.

]]> By: Victoria Dobson http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-64 Victoria Dobson Mon, 21 Apr 2008 14:09:07 +0000 http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-64 OOOOO I really really liked it! The narration was so great, the character seemed so real to me. I love the part when she is getting ready and she keeps going through all the possibilities of the night and then suddenly switches to what she should wear: "Maybe he’ll just want to listen anyways. Maybe he won’t listen no matter what. Maybe bigger earrings will work. And heels." Good Job! OOOOO I really really liked it! The narration was so great, the character seemed so real to me. I love the part when she is getting ready and she keeps going through all the possibilities of the night and then suddenly switches to what she should wear: “Maybe he’ll just want to listen anyways. Maybe he won’t listen no matter what. Maybe bigger earrings will work. And heels.” Good Job!

]]> By: Tabbert Amy http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-63 Tabbert Amy Tue, 01 Apr 2008 13:03:15 +0000 http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-63 That was an amazing story. I'm not usually big on short stories because it seems like they're either too short to figure out whats going on, or that they're too long to be a real "short story". I don't know what Cvet gave you for this, but I'd giv eyou an A. I really liked how developed the character was, how much I could see her come off the page. Very well done. I really like it. That was an amazing story. I’m not usually big on short stories because it seems like they’re either too short to figure out whats going on, or that they’re too long to be a real “short story”. I don’t know what Cvet gave you for this, but I’d giv eyou an A.

I really liked how developed the character was, how much I could see her come off the page. Very well done. I really like it.

]]> By: sfutherwo http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-62 sfutherwo Mon, 31 Mar 2008 21:22:22 +0000 http://acressmanwo.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/the-bottom-of-the-stairs/#comment-62 I really enjoyed that short story. Especially because of the character and how she is narrating. I really love the voice you created, I could totally hear it in my head when I was reading. I also really enjoyed how much the character was so dependent on Bry, I don't know why. Just how she was thinking of what to wear to impress him and how he likes her hair, it just shows how much she really likes him. Awesome job. I really enjoyed that short story. Especially because of the character and how she is narrating. I really love the voice you created, I could totally hear it in my head when I was reading. I also really enjoyed how much the character was so dependent on Bry, I don’t know why. Just how she was thinking of what to wear to impress him and how he likes her hair, it just shows how much she really likes him. Awesome job.

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